Comments on 'Baiting the Trap'

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Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2015-02-12
Aw this was such a sweet thing for Blacksnake to do for his Lifemate, goodness knows she needed it! With Coyote, Whitestag, Willow and Flash after eachother, it's got to take so much out of a Chieftess.
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-24
Heehee! :D I love how Blacksnake wanted to do something so nice and romantic for Easysinger. It felt like a Valentine's Day surprise! ^_^ I just LOVE how you worked in his iconic scowl into the lighthearted story. That made me snicker! ;)

Also, loved how you showed the snowball effect of the prank war!
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-21
Ah, elfin romance! It's nice to be reminded of this different side of Blacksnake once in a while. They made a lovely, fun couple.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-10
I'm sorry I haven't commented on this before now! But you know I love the way the story came out. :) I particularly like how there's no small amount of ego involved in the way Blacksnake decides that HE will make the perfect distraction for Easysinger... and I love that she can't resist getting the better of him, just for a moment. Great job!
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2012-11-03
This story goes perfectly with the illustration. I like how you set the stage, with Blacksnake being irritated at the tense situation in the tribe. Makes sense that he would want to get away!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-09-02
What a great story to go w/ the hot illustration! :) I really like the sense of buildup that you gave, and how comfortable BS and ES seemed together - I know they were Recognized/lifemates, but they're comfortable and playful!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-08-10
I love how you bring up such things as the tension in the tribe made worse by the weather. I so love this kind of details and it's a wonderful setup.

It was also a terat to see a playful side in Blacksnake and how he dose something for the women he loves. Nice use of that image :) I really liked this snipped of Blacksnake's lifemating with the chief :)
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-07-18
It's always a treat to see some back-dated Blacksnake, and to see more of his interactions with Easysinger! And I'll take any excuse to revisit the inspiration-illustration as well! booyah!
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-07-13
Mission accomplished! Hihihi!
Just by looking at the pic I already suspected what BS was up to and grinned through the whole story in anticipation. I really liked your description of what was going on in the Holt. Was a good reminder of life not always pleasant in such a small community.
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