Comments on 'Uncertain Future'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-02-02
You caught the ball of worry in True Edge! This poem makes you feel it in your stomach!! I agree, he is very wolf-y here!
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-13
Thanks so much for the nice comments! :D

I actually intended this to be quite a bit longer, with an entire verse for each tribemate he was worried for, but then the pace just sort of picked up as if it had a will of its own, and I think it actually turned out much for the better this way. :)
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-13
I really like how the brevity of this poem, and the simple, straightforward thoughts in it, are such a good fit for True Edge's character. Somehow it feels like an echo of his wolfy nature -- more complex thinking than a wolf would have, but still, the resemblence is there.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-08-06
This is indeed a very nice summery of the situation and I really like seeing it out of True Edge's perspective. It makes you realize how much they do have on the risk here. I like the last line especially :)
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-07-04
It's good to see True-Edge worried and uncertain... traits one never associates with him. But there is a lot of responsibiliy on his shoulders right now.
And thanks for the summary of the events and of the different locations of the elves.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Updated: 2012-06-27
The poem does offer a good summary. I like that the illo is of True Edge and how uncertain he looks!
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-06-26
A very rhythimical summary of the situation, touching.
Laura Melis
New! Entered: 2012-06-26
That's a really cool poem and what a bonus--an illo too. What I like about the poem was that it's a beautiful summary of what's going on with the tribe after the recent F.O siting.
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