Comments on 'Future's Promise'
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New! Entered: 2016-01-08
|What a cute family moment! You can really feel the love and pride Bladesong has for her son - very sweet :) And it's good to see what Ingot's skills with the sword were when he was a little mump.|
New! Entered: 2015-02-12
|Aw this is actually really sweet, surprising for a troll story! lol I really enjoyed seeing how she corrected him, but in a kind enough manner that it wouldn't feel like she was putting him down about it.|
New! Entered: 2014-04-07
|So sweet to see Bladesong's maternal side here! I love the interaction between her and Ingot, and the way you paint a picture of her justified pride in her son. Lovely snippet of everyday life!|
New! Entered: 2012-12-13
|Thanks for showing that Trolls can be generous as well... at least, when it comes to their family. I guess it was not all too easy for Bladesong to sneak money.|
It was heart-warming to see her pride in her son.
New! Entered: 2012-12-12
|I really love that you provide us with a look at the trolls as loving parents and enthusiastic children, interested in things like learning and accomplishment, not just material riches! It's such a complex view of the trolls, that really brings them alive as sympathetic characters.|
New! Entered: 2012-11-03
|I love seeing little bits and pieces of the trolls' way of life. It's so fascinating! I couldn't help but chuckle at Bladesong's pride in her son - I guess troll parents and elf parents are the same in that way!|
New! Entered: 2012-07-24
|Aww, this was sweet! It's a joy to see how proud Bladesong is of her boy.|
The fighting lesson was great and felt very realistic, and I really enjoy how you're exploring the troll world through these snapshots. Keep them coming :)!
New! Entered: 2012-07-02
|*swoon* This is gerat. I love to see these peeks into the trolls lives. And my heart swelled by the traing sequence. It reminds me on the few lessons I had myself. |
I really grow to like this family. They seem so loving and real. It's a joy to follow their lives and it makes you feel even more for Redpike and his bad luck to have crossed the wrong troll.
New! Entered: 2012-06-19
|I agree w/ Whit! I hope that you continue w/ these snapshots into the troll's world! Bladesong and her son are a joy to read about!|
New! Entered: 2012-05-31
|I love Bladesong's rich pride in her son! And these little snapshots into trollish life are fascinating, so please! Keep them coming!|