Comments on 'Nothing Happens'
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New! Entered: 2014-08-13
|The story and the image go really well together. I love the description you gave of Berryflop while Crest was 'tripping' it really brings the image to life. |
It was nice to see the both of them in such a calm moment, it seems like they are few and far between.
New! Entered: 2014-08-02
|Great to see Crest having a quiet moment - and I love how you've crafted the dreamberry experience! Very surreal.|
New! Entered: 2014-04-21
|Such a trippy story, as others have said before me. I do wonder if this effect of the berries were part of their original purpose (keeping the "starsong" in the elves) or if it's a unplanned side-effect. Either way, intersting imagery!|
New! Entered: 2014-02-26
|Cool. Anyone who has had a beer in a hot tub would so understand that this is possible. And quite the strange rush.|
New! Entered: 2012-12-18
|Wonderful use of language! "Whispery music of leaves and life" Wow!|
Well, the elves - or some elves in particular - do have a thing for drugs and intoxication, don't they? Thanks, for pointing this out.
New! Entered: 2012-08-10
|Really interesting idea done in a nice short way that packs a good punch! The illo really serves to bring this whole thing alive, too -- great use of art to enhance the storytelling.|
New! Entered: 2012-05-21
|The story makes the picture that much more interesting! :) I like, too, how Crest's trip "ended" once he realized he was on it. The ending had me laughing.|
New! Entered: 2012-04-18
|That was neat! The story and the picture go together well, and it's nice to see which effects dreamberries can have on an elf. I liked that this was a very visual story, concentrating on the atmosphere without much happening. Very creative!|
New! Entered: 2012-04-17
|That was an interesting trip. I thought the picture itself was already very creative but together with the story it's even more so. Love how you put them together and I think in this case both go together. |
I agree with Raz. This was a very visual and all around "feel" story. Also liked the atmosphere here and to see a bit of the effect that dreamberries can have on an elf.
A very interesting story.
New! Entered: 2012-04-10
|Woah, trippy! Interesting choice, here, and I must say the whole story was pretty intense in the sense-descriptions. Not what I expected at all, from just the illustration on its own, but they DO fit together perfectly in context.|