Comments on 'A Howl Unlike Any Other'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-11-28
OMG, that made me cry!! And no body, but just a little candle. Having no stories because we never got to know you. And having had a place for you in our hearts. :(
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-25
Ohhhhhh, this is beautiful! I loved the verses of the Howl-song for the unborn baby, and the things that the lyrics said. I especially, especially loved the last line. This story really did bring a sense of closer to the event, and peace.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-06-28
Beautiful and moving! A very fitting Howl, for an unborn cub. Loved the poem-like parts used as "breakers" between the short scenes.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-03-26
I really liked seeing this piece build on "The Littlest Raft". It's good to have this very moving coda to that part of the storyline. I think it gives it a little much-needed sense of closure, instead of the feeling that the storyline rushes onward to the next chapter.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-03-20
Megan, this was beautifully written! Thank you for letting me collaborate and bring "the littlest raft" into it! :) I think this is so fitting for the tribe as a whole, and such a great depiction of communal grieving.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-03-20
This made my eyes pool with some tears Megan. Beautiful. It was short but full of emotions and I like the farewell words here.
Beautiful.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2012-03-19
Thank you for writing this, Megan! It's a lovely short piece to conclude that event. I love the melancholic atmosphere and especially the lines in italics, giving it some almost poetic quality.
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