Comments on 'Itch'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2014-04-23
Intersting sequel! There has been a lot of references to pranks in other stories so it was great to get to see one in action. Poor Snowfall, that had to be terribly annoying - especially when you're tired. But good of Willow to make up for her mschief.
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-12-27
Hehe, kids can be so annoying! ;) I do admire Snowfall's patience here... and also wonder how True Edge might have reacted if Willow's prank would have affected him. Willow is lucky he was not the first in bed.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-03-07
I just had to laugh when I reached the part where Willow was so proud ion her prank. That was just kinda wonderful. A very nice sequel to Itchleaf.
Lovely interaction and just funny to read. I loved seeing Snowfall on her limit but still being calm and reasonable in her anger. Poor TrueEdge. He didn't even know what made his lifemate's mood swing so drastically.

Also love it that Willow was ready to take her "punishment" so willingly.
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2012-03-02
This was a good sequel. Though I have to laugh, it was a pretty good prank and a decent consequence for Willow to have to help with the furs. I wouldn't want for True Edge to have been the one to teach Willow a lesson, that wouldn't have been a pretty sight.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-02-09
Poor Snowfall! No good deed goes unpunished! I really liked how this showed that Willow absorbed Snowfall's earlier lesson, and just found another, less dangerous way to accomplish the same thing. Very creative of the cub!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-02-06
What a wonderful sequel... and young Willow's laughter was contagious! :) I'm glad it was Snowfall, and not True Edge.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2012-02-01
Thank you for this story, Heidi :)! It's such a great continuation of mine (ignoring the fact that you were finished way before me)! Poor Snowfall - I liked that you can clearly see her patience has limits but she's still good at dealing with a cub even if said cub has annoyed her so much. And Willow showed she can play a successful prank without hurting anyone (she must have done more research on her "weapon" this time!) and is willing to own up to the consequences, too. Just great :)!
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-02-01
It's fun to see this sequel! But it's left me with sympathy itches here... ::Offering up both my Lanacane gel and Burt's Bees Poison Ivy Soap::
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