Comments on 'Itchleaf'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-09-07
Willow was rather precocious at six! And yeah, Snowfall came across as a bit annoying LOL. But she is the Cub Whisperer! I wonder what the future prank was??
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-05-03
Ah, the rashness of youth! Interesting look at a prank-almost-gone-wrong and I enjoyed seeing Willow and Snowfall interact.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-03-07
Snowfall has such a deft hand with children. She always seems to me like the born teacher ^^ I love how much on "eyelevel" she interacts with young ones and takes them seriously. I think that might be her secret ^^

Also love Willow here. Her early days as a prankster and her way of thinking and how cleaver she felt, by "scouting" her prank but overlooking the harm in it. Nicely done. Yet she dosn't seem stupid but smart enough to catch on and regret her plans.

Will enjoy to read the follow up here :D Poor Snowfall she didn't know what she was getting into here ^^
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2012-03-03
Haha! Sneaky little Willow. I have to say this was a fun read, learning a little bit more about a young mischievous Willow. I have to say that I quite enjoyed the last line, watch out Snowfall! >:)
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2012-02-05
Mareike, thanks so much for this. I really enjoyed seeing a cub-era story for Willow, and I loved seeing the interactions with Snowfall. It was also fun to work on a co-plot together with our stories!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-01-31
I love how little Willow thinks she has been oh-so clever early on here, from a child's perspective, but really, Snowfall sees right through her. And it's great that Willow does, in the end, seem to learn a lesson... but that last line really made me grin. Poor Snowfall!
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-01-31
LOL! Willow's last words here just leave me chuckling... Poor Snowfall, she meant well...
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-01-31
This is well-written! :) I like how Snowfall was able to get Willow to be honest, and also how she helped Willow to reason out that she shouldn't use the itchleaf for the prank, without lecturing her. Poor Snowfall, though... the price of helping and teaching.
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