Comments on 'Another Try'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-23
Elves sure are different from humans. Imagine having to watch your grandmother have a threesome to help her and her girlfriend get pregnant! But that was well handle here; I barely thought of it, more focused on the tension and then elation of the success.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-03-30
Working backwards in my commenting here... it was nice, when this story showed up, to see the uncertainty of the trio in the first part rewarded by the success in the second part. Just when they were wondering if what they were trying to do was even truly possible! No matter what comes after, at least they all know now that Willow can do it.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-03-07
Yeah! Finally a success. I agree at the beginning it seemed that this would end up in another disappointment for all involved. I loved the first act when Snowfall started to doubt if they are really ready to do this.

The second part was so full of mixed emotions. I too was sitting there thinking "Really? They did it? YES! They did!!"

What a neat surprise and I'm happy for all of them ^^
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-02-13
WOW! This is so fantastic! *has a party* yaaaaaaay! I expected fully that we'd be strung along for quite a bit longer real-life time before getting this wonderful gratification -- and yay, a new character on the way eventually, too! ^_^ I'm already so curious about the new cub. I also totally agree; VERY well written and the ending took me by complete surprise, which is a rare treat in itself. I expected, if anything, them to end up re-strengthening their hope for the continued long haul, but wowza yay! :D
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-02-06
I thought I'd commented on this already - hmmm... :) I can't imagine being this trio, and trying and trying and trying. I'm glad they had success this time, though!
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2012-01-22
Oh yay they did it! Willow did it! This is awesome! I can't wait to meet the new cub! :D
This was an amazing story, so well written, I honestly couldn't get enough of it! There was so much mixed emotion all through the story, and at the end such pure joy. If you write an announcement story, I can't wait to read it! :D
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-01-09
Wohoooo! Congratulations!! :) Very well written and a nice story arc! How mean trying to fool us with this teaster. :P
Guido Klein
New! Entered: 2012-01-05
I was feeling almost the same at the beginning as the trio: again? Does this really make sense trying so hard? And I did not expect the outcome. What a wonderful surprise! I hope everything goes well with the first induced pregnancy.
Kyna Hansen
New! Entered: 2012-01-04
This is amazing! I was kind of expecting it to end differently. I wonder if we are going to see Willow's POV from all of this at some point? I'm certainly excited about the possibilities.
Linda Aarts
New! Entered: 2012-01-03
OMG OMG OMG, THEY DID IT! :D :D When I started reading, I was sure this try would not succeed - Snowfall's pregnancy was a huge surprise in the end! Congrats! They've got a long road ahead, but the first mission's accomplished ;)
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