Comments on 'To Prank a Prankster'

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Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-13
It really makes so much sense to me that for the tribe's children, someone like Notch would prove an irresistible target! Growing children with ambitions of their own are of course going to want to measure themselves against the best! But I love how this also makes clear that it's going to be a long while before they actually have a chance of succeeding. ;-) Still, you have to admire the attempt!
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2012-12-03
Somehow I couldn't stop giggling during this story XD The way you describe Rill's and Notch's facial expressions is too funny! I also love that Notch knew what they were up to even before they tried the prank, and was one step ahead! I wouldn't expect any less from him :p
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2011-12-09
Very nice story! Poor Holt, never a generation without its own pranksters.
I liked to see Notch with Otter instead of Foxtail as one might have expected .
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-11-16
I *love* that Notch is their target here... And that he wasn't bested and used it as an opportunity. :) Also like seeing Otter helping big brother out.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-11-13
Very ambitious those two. This was a fun little story and I like to see so three generations of pranksters playing it off against each other.

Very cute lighthearted story. I'm looking forward to see more of their tries to take on the chief of pranks ^^
Kyna Hansen
New! Entered: 2011-11-12
This was pretty neat. I liked seeing my two boys playing together! Cinder and Rill were cute too :)
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-11-11
Hehe, that was cute! Great to see that the next generation of pranksters is already making their way - life won't become boring :p. And Cinder and Rill are certainly ambitious, trying to pull a prank on Notch! I really like such nice, lighthearted little pieces.
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2011-11-11
I really like this story. Maybe I'm biased because Rill's in it. Either way, I thought it was a light-hearted moment, which is nice.
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