Comments on 'A Family Hunt'

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Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2014-10-28
One of my favorites featuring our trio! I love the way this story shows how in tune with each other they all are, and the way you described hunting really helped me visualize it all in my mind. I always find it so difficult to write hunting realistically, having no experience with it. Also, when this story was published we were all knee-deep in the healer-assisted pregnancy storyline, so it was really nice to see our elders get this break to do something they enjoy and not think about more unpleasant things.
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2012-01-22
Oh cool. This is was a nice look at the life of these three. Everything thing seems so natural and flows so well with them, even the good natured arguments. Thanks for giving us this look! :D
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-11-01
It's really nice to see this slice-of-life interlude between stories that are focused on the pregnancy issue. It really helps to give a more rounded sense of the relationship between these three. And it reminds you that True Edge and Snowfall may not hunt together all that often, since both probably lead their own groups of more junior hunters much of the time. So you really get a sense of this as not just a hunt, but a pleasurable activity for them to share.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-11-01
Yay, it's up! I really love this story - I sometimes think there are too few hunt stories for this holt, considering how important it is for the elves, but most of us don't have any idea what we're talking about when writing about it. You do, obviously :p. And it's always great to see such scenes of daily life and our three just being together. I love that you feel their love and affection without it being shoved into your face. More of that, please!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-10-31
:) Thank you for a glimpse of life for this trio! :) It's nice to see moments like this...
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-10-31
Again, great portrait of a hunt. I always admire it when you go in so much detail of the strategy and the way it works out (or not).
It's nice to see these three together. They have such a nice relationship. I like all the bickering and teasing and it's nice to now they still have time for just themselves even if they try to get another cub.
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