Comments on 'Rest for the Weary'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-22
Quick Fang being understanding and kind, in her own way, was a nice thing to include in a story. Her and Foxtail interacting was a great look at different sides of their characters.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-11-01
Others are right, this look at Quick Fang being helpful -- even generous -- but still very much herself (a little brusque, almost impatient), is great. Also, thank you for this look at this important juncture in the aftermath of Whispersilk's death, especially for the look at the way various people are coping and finding ways to move forward, because they have to.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-11-01
Great to see more about Foxtail dealing with her mother's death and with Cinder! I guess for their relationship it was a "good" event, it helped her through her jealousy, and I really like seeing how responsible she feels for him now. And it's great to see how even an elf who isn't social like Quickfang is there to support her tribesmates when she is needed. Very lovely!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-10-31
Thanks, Melanie! I think that time after Whispersilk's death is so ripe for so many more stories than we've seen... :)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-10-31
It's good to see more stories that have Whispersilk's death as a topic. It's very touching how much Foxtail feels responsible for her little brother. If you look back how jealous she had been, this is truly a twist for the better.

Cinder is lucky to have her, QuickFang is right. Also nice to see the snappy QuickFang in such a supportive role.
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