Comments on 'A Hunt of Her Own'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2015-01-01
It's great to see Honey bonding with True Edge! I don't recalling having seen these two interact much and True Edge very much strikes me as the "get things done, teach people lessons" kind of elf. It makes sense to me that he would be the one to give Honey her first chance at a true hunt and I like how the story flowed :)
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2014-03-01
Fantastic to see True Edge take on a new challenge as Honey struggles to prove herself. It's great to see characters reach out despite the thorniness of her post-unwrapping. I thought this struck a good balance with the characters' personalities, and it's interesting to see that Honey's persistence with Mooncrier had some good consequences. :)
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-11-01
Really good to see TE here in the role of a teacher! But also, to get the sense in this that he is giving Honey something valuable merely by treating her desire to become a hunter seriously, and accepting her. It really does seem to be just what she needed at this early stage of her development! And it gives the sense that by some of the tribe's senior hunters accepting her, others should follow their lead.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-11-01
Great! I just love to see the tribesmates supporting each other and how it comes out of left field to Honey that one of the elders and especially True Edge is willing to give her a chance and help her :). Honey still has a long way to go until she has really gained the respect back, I guess, but it's great to see that she continues to try and has some success!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-10-31
Neat!
I really didn't see this pair up coming. Yet, even if I was wondering along with Honey, why True Edge was doing this, his answer was so simple and therefore so fitting for him.

Loved the detail with Mooncrier watching Honey closely. She has so many beings around she has to prove herself to. And the hunt was very well described. I couldn't write one for my live.
Kyna Hansen
New! Entered: 2011-10-17
True-Edge was definitely well played in this story. I enjoyed the character progression. Lord knows, Honey could end up being a ferocious huntress. Very nice :)
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-10-17
Mike, thank you for having TE reach out to Honey! I am glad to see her (slowly) being accepted and enveloped by the tribe, and even more glad to see her accepting it!
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