Comments on 'Dissonance'

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Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-10-27
Huh, I haven't had commented this one yet?
I really like this as the prelude for what's comming... poor Greenweave and Cloudfern. ;) Newt is so adorably determined in everything he trys. Adding Rainpace here and showing his interest makes curious for what will follow.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-05-03
This story made me feel belated pity for my poor parents and sister, who had to put up with me clumsily learning the trombone. I'll keep my fingers crossed that Newt recieves some much needed assistance in his learning!
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-11-05
This one is so cute! Poor Newt, he really has to work for his goals, but I love that he is both aware that he's bad and still determined to improve! The scene with Greenweave and Cloudfern was absolutely cute and hilarious :). I do hope to see more about the hinted-at connection with Rainpace soon!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-11-01
I really like how this continues to show Newt as being so sweetly determined. The reactions of Greenweave and Cloudfern were kind of hilarious (such hopeful parents!), but I particularly liked the way the end of this hints at ties with other tribemates (like Rainpace) being created.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-10-31
Thanks you Lyn. I really do enjoy working in this story line here.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-10-12
Aaaaw. Poor Newt! I love his determination and how he knows he sounds terrible playing but keeps trying! :) it's always nice to read about characters learning and growing.
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