Comments on 'Old Habits'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2014-07-13
Poor, poor Quick Fang! Whatever did she do to earn Rainpace's wrath? Well, I guess he just felt like pranking someone. Interesting to see him get back to his "roots" so to speak. And Rill, I hope you grow up to be less loud or the Holt will never be quiet again XD
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2012-01-28
Oh Yay! Rainpace is getting back into things! I'm so happy to see him stir up a little bit of trouble, and with Quick Fang no less. I really enjoyed seeing it play out, seeing how he was frustrated, not knowing why, and then figuring it out and acting on it. Its was a really fun story!
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-01-26
Oh, my gosh! This was too, too funny! :D I totally agree with the others as well; the interaction between Rainpace and Chicory was great in the start of the story. As for Rainpace's prank, I just cannot get over it! It definitely reminds me of what my mother aways used to call "the kind of gift you get for the children of someone you hate" (those toys you push around with the little plastic balls that jump up with a horrible POP-POP-POP-POP-POP!!! sound). I love the deviousness with which Rainpace executed his scheme, too. ;) It's not his fault... *innocent whistle* Right. ;) I, too, would love to see what was going on in Quick Fang's den just then!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-09-19
Love this look at Rainpace getting his groove back! And I particularly liked that he did it on his own -- I mean, that he didn't go seeking out his prankster friends, but rather, he came up with and executed something all on his own. It really shows that he's still got it. ;-) I also really liked that Chicory noticed something was up with him, and she was worried about it... but she didn't go overboard in trying to solve it, instead letting him figure it out in his own time. That's a nice portrayal of an even-handed relationship between them, good friends, but not too smothering. (And I liked how she had his number, at the end.)
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2011-09-09
Squeeee! Rainpace can be wicked, can't he? It's not ALWAYS Notch or Willow instigating the trouble... This fic just left me laughing! It reminds me of the perverse joy I get out of finding the most loudly annoying toys for my sister Wendy's kids each Christmas...
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-09-06
Great to see that Rainpace hasn't grown up completely! Poor Quick Fang, though ...

I agree with the others that I liked the relationship between Chicory and Rainpace here especially. The lightness between them is very nice, and it shows that they are friends above all.
Joanne P.
New! Entered: 2011-08-26
I love seeing the relationship between Chicory and Rainpace, you can definitely feel how they are friends above everything else. And as a mother, I have to say what Rainpace did was truly cruel.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-08-22
Hahahahahah! :) thank you for making me smile! :) I <3 Rainpace here, and his way of getting at Quick Fang, but indirectly and through Rill! :) This was wonderful!
Tabitha Rosbergen
New! Entered: 2011-08-19
Wow what a story, i really love it.

it really shows how well chicory and rainpace know itch other
and poor poor Quick Fang (i think she is gonna hide that flute very soon)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-08-19
Yeah... if you want to punish the parents give their children an instrument to learn... isn't that what they say?
Poor QuickFang.

Nice story. Didn't we all just fear Rainpace would grow up too much, just a little? I think it's your best story till now. From the writing up to the interaction. I really liked the bit between Chicory and Rainpace in the start and the playful interaction. It kinda shows the lightness and between them and for sure that they are old friends
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