Comments on 'Ups and Downs'
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New! Entered: 2014-10-03
|I really like seeing this 'different' relationship. I've always wondered about Moss and Nightstorm's relationship - while they are Recognized, it's interesting (and refreshing) to see that they did grump at one another from time to time and that they didn't always get along, but that they still cared for one another.|
New! Entered: 2014-04-11
|Always interesting to see a take in elfin pregnancy that isn't all sunshine and roses; not to meantion a couple where hhings don't run smooth all the time. In short, nice interesting conflict!|
New! Entered: 2011-09-20
|Oh, this is neat! I like how it expands our knowledge of the relationships in the tribe. And how it shows an example of Recognition creating a somewhat imperfect couple.|
New! Entered: 2011-07-09
|This story wouldn't have been thought up if it weren't for the Random Combos Contest and the assignment I was given... :) :) Thanks for all the great comments! :)|
New! Entered: 2011-06-18
|This was a nice story. I agree it's good to see all three of them in their moods. Poor Moss and poor Nightstorm as well. I understand why both seemed so tensed and riled up. |
And I just love to see Thornbow here. Reassuring and a friend when needed. The scene of the two of them drinking just made me chuckle. And .. O-Ha of all elves I would have suspected Thornbow the least to be a comforter in Moss furs ;)
Anhow.. I still hope the romance between Thornbow and Nightstorm will take place and this would b such a nice thing in the background for them XD
New! Entered: 2011-05-21
|This is fabulous! I especially loved seeing the scene with Moss and Thornbow together, sharing the drink. Loved that!|
New! Entered: 2011-05-05
|My favorite thing here was seeing these three characters in a different "mode" than they're usually in - Moss is usually portrayed as so laid back that it was a lot of fun seeing him angry for once, and a peek into the time of Nightstorm's pregnancy and their relationship was great too - a tribe history blank spot that it's good to have filled. Now it makes me want to read more about them.|
New! Entered: 2011-04-25
|Wow, that was quite an emotional roller-coaster ride both for the characters and the readers! You really managed to make me sympathize with Moss and still understand Nightstorm in the end. Pregnancy can be really a difficult time - poor elves, they have to suffer through two years of that :P.|
New! Entered: 2011-04-25
|Great story! I loved to see Moss grumpy and snappy! ;) Poor guy, Nightstorm really gave him a hard time.|
You managed to show the complexity of all three characters, made them three-dimensional.