Comments on 'Snake Eyes'

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Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-26
Heehee, awwww, poor Starskimmer. :) What rotten luck! I agree, I can't recall seeing a denial like this before, either! Interesting way to end the story!
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2012-02-09
Oh wow, this is the first time I've out and out seen a denial like this. It took me off guard and was a nice way to end it. You can really tell that these two and a long friendship, and they know quite a bit about one another. It was a really fun read. :)
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-09-20
Hah! I like the sense of old friendship in this. And I really like how Starskimmer throws herself into the game. But I almost get the feeling that she's more disappointed that in Moss's rejection at the end than she is about "losing". ;-)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-06-18
Hehe, that was real fun! I just love to See Starskimmer using her ... err female augments and skills to try and turn the game to her favor ... well kinda... after she lost. She seems always to be on the upside of life. I envy her for that talent ;)

Just a fun story. I really really enjoyed it :D
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-06-18
Haha, this was fun! I really liked how Starskimmer tried to get back at him instead of sulking over her loss, though it didn't work - but I agree with Peggy, I bet they continued where they left off right after Moss got his cider!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-06-17
This is fantastic!!! I can't say enough for the interactions between these two! And that Starskimmer doesn't want to lose but takes the loss as an opening for a different kind of win. All in all this was just fun reading that made me smile.
Joan Milligan
New! Entered: 2011-05-05
Hee! He's not so easy, Starskimmer! These two make a hella fun pair :D.
Afke van Herpt
New! Entered: 2011-04-30
Haha, too bad. ;)
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2011-04-10
Haha, come on, you do not wanna tell me that the two elves with the highest libido of the whole tribe wouldn┤t have continued with what they were doing after Moss got his cider?? :D :D :D
I really enjoyed this little, entertaining story.
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