Comments on 'Glow's Birth'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-11-16
I love this! Rainpace seems very much a boy still. Like a 23 year old sensitive guy becoming a first time father! And Chicory seems like the hard-broiled type who would been the 40 something year old single mom LOL! I know I'm projecting onto humans but hey! What else can I do? LOL. And when will they become life-mates, anyway!? ;)
Ally Raidel
New! Entered: 2014-02-25
Ha! This is such a fun birth story. Glow clearly has a heck of a sense of timing!

I also enjoyed this as the first birth pic I've read in the Elfquest world. I've always been kind of curious about how their birth works given that it doesn't hurt 'if all goes well.' I like how you (two) handled it and it was a joy to read. What a sweet little family!
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-14
This was so much fun to write with you, Peggy! I also think writing this helped me understand Chicory and Rainpace's relationship a bit better, too. :) I just love seeing Rainpace the overanxious lovemate/father here! Too, too adorable. I also loved how they ended up choosing Chicory's den. ;) And by the end of the story, I can imagine the tribe waiting outside is ready to explode if Rainpace doesn't get out there soon with the cub, LOL!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-09-20
I'm so glad you both gave us a story about Glow's birth, and turned it into such a nice character-study of what kind of couple Chicory and Rainpace are! I really like that their partnership remains dynamic, without either one giving in to the other's direction too easily.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2011-06-23
Rainpace's worrying was both amusing and sweet, the banter-argument between him and Chicory put a smile on my face and Glow is already showing much personality, having just been born. Written well, I say!
Tabitha Rosbergen
New! Entered: 2011-06-21
I guess Glow came out just on time looking at Chicory's point. poor Rainpace.

I think it's a lovely story
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-06-18
*laughs* Poor Rainpace, he really is at the mercy of those two women in his life already, eh? It was great to see that Chicory stood up to him - after all, he is being unreasonable *shakes head*. He will be one of those fathers who growl at everyone just looking at their darling girl the wrong way, I fear!

And it was great to see Glow arrive in the tribe finally. What a timing she has :p.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-06-18
Poor Rainpace :P He is stuck with two very strong headed females I fear. I really love ho much he frets and worries about their safety and how Chicory seems to be the strong leading pat her even in her pain.

And I agree. It was very smart and sneaky of Chicory to solved the argument this way.
Poor Rainpace. He's going to have a long time ahead being wrapped around their fingers.
Karena Kliefoth
New! Entered: 2011-04-03
Looks like Glow decided to end the argument with her arrival! I think Rainpace is going to have his hands full with Chicory and Glow.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-04-01
I think what stood out to me most was just how protective Rainpace is/was/is going to be... :) Too funny! :) I like how different life circumstances show us different sides of the elves. :) I especially like how Chicory resolves the argument... :) Good thing Glow was born in *her* den.
Kyna Hansen
New! Entered: 2011-04-01
One, I love stories about children, birth, rearing, pregnancy, all of those things, and two, I'm so glad Starskimmer gets to be apart of it! A really nice story, and a great glimpse into the relationship of Chicory and Rainpace.
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2011-04-01
LOL! Chicory can be twisty, can't she? I love her resolution to the argument! Well done, Chicory, well done!
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