Comments on 'Best Brother'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-05-19
At first I thought she was a cub when I read this. Then I look at the timeline and see she's an adult!! I think. Unless I've got my math way wrong. At any rate, it's nice to see her make Windburn be playful for once!!
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2015-02-09
Aw this is sweet, I love how you described how Chicory sees her brother and how just how much she knows about him. I also enjoyed seeing how she convinced Windburn to stay and look for the lizard with her.
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2012-08-15
I LOVE the interaction between these two! Though they're very different in personality, they still love each other and continue to enjoy each other's company even as adults. I sometimes find Windburn to be a little hard to understand, and this story gives some great insight into his character.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-07-01
The way Windburn taught Chicory to record her discoveries was very inventive and clever. The siblings' relationship was fun to get a closer look at; I haven't read about them interacting that much yet and this really gave me a good picture of who they are to one another.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-09-20
I really love this brother-sister moment. They're so different (well, Chicory is so different from most of her family!), but it's clear that Chicory can reach something inside Windburn that few others can. I'd like to see more of that.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-07-27
This, in contrast to Redfox's relationship with Riskrunner, is incredible! I'd love to see a story on the three of them together.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-06-22
Aww, this was wonderful! Chicory is still a bit of a mystery to me, I have to admit, and this was as much a wonderful character study of her as a great look at another side of our quiet chief. It's great how well Chicory knows to read him, and I'm really happy to know that Windburn has someone in his life he can be so relaxed around :).
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-06-17
How sweet to see the siblings together here and another side of Windburn. It's so nice to see him laughing and smiling for a change. Really!
What I really love about your stories is how lush they are with details but never seem overloaded with them so it get's distracting.
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2011-03-07
Lovely lovely lovely! I really enjoy getting to share in this moment with these two -- thank you very much! Both Chicory and Windburn have deserved a sweet little fic like this.
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