Comments on 'Beads'
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New! Entered: 2016-02-25
|Oh, the frustration of your kid causing trouble, and you've been literally watching them the whole time!! Very good depiction of a tot here! Can barely communicate, causes trouble and you CAN'T get mad at her!!|
New! Entered: 2011-09-20
|Beetle is SUCH a little kid, here! I really like the sense at the end that she's very much her mother's daughter in some ways, too.|
New! Entered: 2011-07-27
|I'm so glad that you all enjoyed this story! :) it was a lot of fun to write! :)|
New! Entered: 2011-06-22
|Aww, too cute! Laughter is absolutely adorable - poor Cloudfern, though! He doesn't stand a chance against two women. I liked that he didn't think of looking if Laughter had the beads - I think we all know that effect of "Why didn't I look there in the first place?!". And I also loved seeing Starskimmer and Cloudfern interact - I agree with Mel, it gives off more a friendship vibe.|
New! Entered: 2011-06-21
|I can definitely see where Laughter got her name - quite the little prankster and with a mother to match! Poor Cloudfern never stood a chance. I recognize myself in how he searched for the beads without looking in the most logical place first, very amusing!|
New! Entered: 2011-06-17
|Adorable! It's fun to see the parenthood duties shared by Cloudfern and Starskimmer here, and little Beetle is just the cat's meow here -- if she got any cuter, I'd go into overload. Great work!|
New! Entered: 2011-06-16
|Oh my goodness, this was just to precious. Little Laughter was just to cute and I could see her smiling all the time and laughing. And it was also nice to see her curious nature was always a part of her, Very very sweet. And I just loved to see Cloudfern and Starskimmer sharing the parenting duty. |
Poor guy through XD To have to put up with two so smart and mischievousness ladies.
Another note.. I like it how you sense more of a friendship between the recognized here then a lovemating. It really stood out to me aside from the cuteness.
New! Entered: 2011-05-05
|Oh that was almost *painfully* cute. I just whizzed through it with a big stupid smile on my face, practically hearing the laugh of that little elf girl. Now I feel like I have to run find something to hug!|
|Afke van Herpt|
New! Entered: 2011-04-30
|Hahaha, that little rascal! XD|
New! Entered: 2011-04-27
|*snicker* I hate it when my beads go missing. Just wait 'til the child is a young teen. You won't be able to find anything of value 'cause she has it! Nice feel to the story line. Very warm and charming.|
New! Entered: 2011-03-12
|Very sweet! Nice to see Starskimmer and Cloudfern as parents of a little cub.|