Comments on 'A Bird's Eye View'
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New! Entered: 2015-02-09
|Aw this is cute, Grandmother watching her granddaughter build something, her different thoughts on her appearance and her her hopes for the young girl. I also love that you managed to get in her approval of Bowflight's parenting, its a really nice touch that I enjoyed seeing.|
New! Entered: 2014-04-23
|Interesting interaction between grandmother and granddaughter, even though it was onesided. I love getting a look inside the heads of the River Twine elves and learning more about Kestrel and her view of her family was great!|
New! Entered: 2012-12-27
|Ooooooooooh, now that's really not fair! I wanna know what Willow's making! :P I really loved Kestrel's POV here. Not only di dyou give us a very nice glimpse inside her mind, and a very clear image of what she's seeing from little Willow, but I pictured the whole thing *from above*, so your writing really supported that angle of view! :D The title is a really nice fit, too! Willow is so cute, stomping her little foot. Urgh! I hafta know what she's making! ^_^|
New! Entered: 2011-09-21
|I really like how this piece underscores the fact that children, even at a very young age, will show glimpses of who they will grow up to be. But, at the same time, they represent unknown promise. Willow's stubborn determination is on display here -- but as the reader knows, Kestrel doesn't dream of what fate has in store for this little bundle of potential.|
New! Entered: 2011-07-27
|I hope someone illustrates this at some point! :) It's really neat to see Kestrel watch her granddaughter and not join in this time!|
New! Entered: 2011-07-21
|I thought for sure I had commented on this! |
That said, I really liked this little look at Kestrel's POV here. I like, as others have said, how she see's promise in her granddaughter. Makes one wonder what she would be thinking if she knew then what she knows now!
I also like the little glimpse you've given into how stubborn Willow was even at this young age. I'm dying to know what exactly she was trying to make here ;)
New! Entered: 2011-06-23
|Oh, this was a lovely snippet, showing both a lot of Kestrel and of young Willow! I really wonder what Willow was doing there - too bad we will probably never know. But it was very sweet to see how Kestrel is seeing so much promise in her granddaughter :).|
New! Entered: 2011-06-15
|That was very sweet and very insightful into kestrel as a grandmother. It always baffles me through to think of those sexy elf as a grandmother XD |
I really like the way you describe what willow is trying there and how Kestrel takes her own conclusions from it and sees a promising clever and smart youngster coming out of this. :D
New! Entered: 2011-02-09
|Lovely reflection from Kestrel! It's interesting to see her watch a very young Willow, and I love the sense of promise that Kestrel sees in her granddaughter. :)|