Comments on 'Making Sense of it All'

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Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2012-08-10
I love to see how much True Edge has matured in recent years...he's willing to let his anger pass instead of holding onto it stubbornly as he once might have. I wonder if his ladies had anything to do with that ;P
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-09-21
It's nice to see how the experience of seeing/feeling what happened with Owl affected True Edge -- especially since he has always been the type who wants to see/experience something for himself before he comes to a conclusion, rather than take others' word for something. But it's even more touching to see his simple conclusion that Willow is *one of them*, part of the tribal family, no matter what.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2011-06-30
True Edge's reasoning is wonderfully "simple", but not in a negative way. It was a nice look into his view of Willow's actions and the lessons of the past.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-06-23
It's great to see how True Edge is ticking! I like that he is still angry but acknowledges that it will pass with time - it's an important lesson that there is no instant forgiveness but time will heal that wound, too. And I really enjoyed seeing the deep and easy understanding between Snowfall and him.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-05-08
This was a very good piece for True Edge Mike. I so love to see how he ticks. It's good to see he's still angry but allowing himself to give it a chance to fade and accepts what had happened with Willow.
It's also nice to see him and Snowfall together like this the dynamic between the two of them is so great. You just know they are a pair together since ages.
Again also liked to see how some members reacted n th story about Owl.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-03-08
Mike, I really liked seeing how dynamic True Edge can be... how as angry as he was, he's willing to let himself work towards forgiveness....
Kyna Hansen
New! Entered: 2011-01-31
This is good. I'm glad to see stories about reactions to major events like this. They really help to develop the characters involved. I should really do some of these for SS...
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