Comments on 'Glittering Gift'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-08-25
My favorite part was when Tremor is so happy that he gets to stay up late. Had several IRL flashbacks of that. When the kids were little a nature center had programs for them at night so they could see the frogs. Same reaction!! It's the little things. :)
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-30
Ah, dear little Tremor. It's heartbreaking to see a child sad, especially right after they've been elated, and this story really captured that. Goldspice handled the situation so well, ending this on a high note so to speak :)
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2012-02-25
I really enjoyed seeing a young Longshot here, and seeing his relationship with Goldspice. Which to be honest I've always been rather curious about. I love how excited he was when he thought he had some real gold to give her, and how honest Goldspice was with him. I don't know if I could have done that. Him getting all sad probably would have made me just let him keep believing whatever he wanted. XD Goldspice is a really good person and I think that she would probably make a good mother. :)
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-09-21
I really love how very little-kid this is of young Longshot, naive and inexperienced, easily swept up by surface glitter, but heartfelt. I especially like this because of the way it hints at how he must have grown up regarding Goldspice as nearly another mother, or at least, a very special adult, closer than an aunt. Such interesting family dynamics there, that we seldom see explored.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-01-13
I really enjoyed this... little Longshot/Tremor is just precious, and Goldspice was a good "other" mother for him. I really like how she was sensitive to him, and honest with him!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-01-10
This was darling Amy. So sweet and innocent somehow and I love to see the relationship between Longshot and Goldspice in this early years.
And wasn't Longshot just the sweetest and happiest little thing? I love his attributes about Gifts ^^
I also love how Goldspice handles the situation.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-01-05
Aww, this was adorable! Poor little Tremor, he was so excited about his gift, and then it turned out to be mock-gold ... But Goldspice handled it very well, managing to make him cheer up again. So nice to see the two of them interact and how close they are! And it's the perfect companion story to that picture :).
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