Comments on 'Crossing Paths'

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Ingrid G.
New! Updated: 2016-02-28
Now maybe Cloudfern, Farscout and True Edge will get back to normal with Willow once they realize she and Brightwood are fast friends!! A nice wrap up to that whole affair!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-09-22
It was really great to see this interaction, because for such a long time, we have seen people feeling things ABOUT Brightwood, and on behalf of her... but her own voice has been absent from her own story. But here she is -- and she isn't quite like any of the others, she's a really new voice. That has to be helpful to Willow as well. I liked her pragmatic approach, not sparing Willow's feelings too much when a sharp word was needed, but also commisserating, reminding us that Brightwood herself could be reckless... a fact that people will have to be reminded of, I think! (I really look forward to the day she and Willow decide to team up to play some prank!)
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2011-06-30
Seeing Brightwood interact with Willow was great! It was good to read a sum-up of Willow's view of the healing, after the sharing of Owl's actions, and having her talk to Brightwood about it fit, somehow. Brightwood having had no previous idea of who Willow is or how trustworthy she is, she has enough clean perspective and clear headed judgement to both support and give advice.
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2011-06-16
This is such a fun story! It's great to see Brightwood working things out for herself, and I'm really looking forward to seeing more about the developing friendship between these two.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-11-18
Hehe I knew this ending was coming :P
This was a nice little story here :) It also was nice to get a recapture of the whole healing issues from Willow and having Brightwood so interested in her side of the story. It shows a lot of her character and how she thinks :)
Willow was so tame here XD I was glad to see some of her spunk in the end again ;) I can't wait to see more of Brightwood interacting with the rest of the tribe :D
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-11-12
Ah, it is great to see that at least one of the persons involved in this affair (albeit the one least active, for obvious reasons) is not holding a grudge towards Willow! It doesn't surprise me that Brightwood and her get along well, they are a bit similar in character after all :). What I also liked a lot was that Willow is still having trouble dealing with this entirely rationally - she obviously has thought about it a lot and is trying to take the blame but she still has some resentments. I think that's very realistic!
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2010-11-10
As plump as it may sounds, but IMO Brightwood is sooooo cool. ;) And I like how you always manage to bring something funny into your stories about her.
I can imagine her and Willow becoming really good friends.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2010-11-10
I'm so glad you two wrote this... :) I really like that Brightwood and Willow are on a start to becoming friends... and I wonder how that will impact Farscout's feelings about Willow.
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2010-11-09
Haha, oh that ending just cracked me up. Poor Brightwood! Nice to see these two reconciling and talking things out!
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