Comments on 'Just a Little Nudge'

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Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2012-11-08
This was so adorable! I couldn't help but feel a bit bad for Otter, who just couldn't quite work up the courage to take things a little further before Newt fell asleep XD I really like seeing this vulnerable, insecure side of Otter.
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-07-15
Awww, poor Otter! :D I really liked to see his very sensitive attempts on seduction. But Newt seems not ready... yet. You portraited him very sweet and innocent in a quite natural way, without exaggerations.
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2012-01-28
Poor Otter, I feel bad for him. I wants to show his interest in Newt but he just fell asleep! Haha! Then again it seems like Newt knows something he's just not ready yet. I guess we'll just have to wait and see. I really loved this little snippet of their relationship.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-09-22
Aww! I really like how this shows that Otter is just a little farther along in development than Newt, and a little bit more aware of what he wants. Although it makes me wonder if Newt would just be that innocent, no matter what. But Otter's hesitation here is very sweet. I look forward to seeing things progress between these two.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-07-08
This was just plain fun :D I'm glad you guys like it and I'm myself are curious where this will end. I have to admit I have no idea if this will lead int a romantic relationship or not/
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2011-06-23
Ah, the unresolved sexual tension! It was so thick here I could almost poke it with a spoon. Otter's crush on Newt is so very believable and the detail of Newt's changing scent earned this story a gold star, in my opinion.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-03-29
You did a phenomenal job building up the tension! I love how Otter wants to be respectful, to go slow, and how Newt is enthusiastic in his response - just not the way Otter was hoping... :)
Hannah Bochart
New! Entered: 2010-12-15
Oh, poor Otter, the frustration of foiled amour! I love how prepared he is, and the careful way he plans the scene out in his head only to have the opportunity missed again! And Newt, how cute is he? I love that he still sees their relationship as best buds, totally missing the conflict that's going on inside his friend's head. Just great!
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-11-05
This is so cute - poor Otter, he's so curious but then he's thwarted again XD! And Newt is still completely oblivious ... I really like seeing this relationship develop so slowly, and I look forward to see more of it!
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2010-11-01
Aww. I love the way you build the tension in Otter - the careful planning, the wondering... and all to wait another night. I think that's pretty realistic. I thought for sure at one point that this would be it! But you tease. ;)
Mike H.
New! Entered: 2010-11-01
I do like this and it's good to see this story line continue to develop. Newt is just so adorable to be so oblivious. :) Soon though he will realize whats going on and I cant wait to see that story.
Linda Aarts
New! Entered: 2010-11-01
Haha, poor Otter! I'm sure Newt is oblivious to Otter's intensions, he's so naive and cute. I wonder what this will lead to :)
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