Comments on 'Intervention'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-07-07
I love how creative the elves are! First Rainpace's music, now Beetle's wolf friends... They should be lawyers, they're so good at finding loop holes!
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2011-12-28
I love how creative beetle can be. Thinking of getting Willow's wolf friend to help, brilliant!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2011-09-22
I like how Beetle's cleverness came up with a roundabout way to help, that wouldn't break the rules. And it's especially interesting in light of the later story we got about Beetle's own experiences during her own shunning; clearly, her actions in this story are the result of her learning things in that one.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-07-27
This was a story where the balance was delicate... Beetle wanting to obey her chief, and help her lovemate. Shunnings are hard on both the shunned and the tribe... I hope others will explore the impact of the shunnings on their characters, too! :)
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2011-06-30
Willow and Beetle's lovemating makes me so happy to read about, even when they're going through a rough time. Beetle's silent support and care for Willow during her shunning was touching and felt very loving.
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2010-11-10
Sweet, sweet Beetle! :) Its always great to see how much she loves Willow.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-11-05
Gotta start off the comment with a bit of criticism - it's very nice to see Beetle be curious and her scientific self but here I felt it was a bit too forced and disjointed with the rest of the story ... It felt as if you just needed a reason for her to be out in the storm so she could see Willow ^^'.

But apart from that: I was so glad that Willow was not alone during her shunning but that Beetle kept watch over her a bit! Good that Beetle found a way to help her lovemate without breaking Windburn's order! And I also liked seeing Rooter again - she's such a characteristic wolf :p.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-11-01
It's nice to see how you use almost every story to show us not only a inside of Beetle herself but her way to care for those close to her :)
It is very tricky to see her wanting to warm Willow so badly and yet her respect for Windburn and his order. It's nice to see how she can come up with a way to help though :D
Mike H.
New! Entered: 2010-11-01
I have been a big fan of this relationship every since it started. Willow and Beetle seem sooo good together. Leave it to Beetle to find a creative way to help her without getting on the chiefs bad side.
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2010-10-24
Poor Willow. It's good to see Beetle's caring nature finding ways to get around the shunning. It must have been so hard on both of them. I like the questions that Beetle raises about the skyfire, I think that was a perfect touch to bring in her scientific-minded nature!
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