Comments on 'Glow's Necklace'

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Beth K.
New! Entered: 2015-12-11
I love the story that your necklace inspired! It's so great to see all the young kids out together, and you really vividly captured the different personalities. It was nice to have Farscout and Goldspice together as siblings watching over the kids. Glow really shines here, I love what she found and the happiness that just exudes out from her and she shares her discovery.
Ally Raidel
New! Entered: 2014-06-07
Oh my gosh! This is brilliant! I was looking for a story to give me an idea of the interactions between Glow and her parents, and I couldn't have clicked a more perfect example. So sweet and funny.

I also have a huge desire to acquire a piece of coprolite to show my preschoolers now!
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-30
Treasure's are in the eyes of the beholder indeed. Smooth move from Rainpace :)
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-02-21
This is another story which sort of wrote itself. I actually own this necklace -- it's a 3 or 4 million year old fossilized piece of beaver or giant sloth poo, which was recovered from the high desert of Central Oregon. I love it!
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2012-01-28
That was really cute, though I have to say this line: "It's my poo! Mine!” made me laugh so hard! I love how you show how frustrated she's getting being younger then the rest, and not finding anything but just as young children do they forget about it when they find something small even without knowing that its something rare.
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2011-06-22
Beauty is indeed in the eye of the beholder! I really like how the story illustrates how unusual things can be one person's treasure. I also enjoyed seeing the cubs interact with one another in a realistic game of "My treasure is better!". Very fun to read.
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2011-06-22
Beauty is indeed in the eye of the beholder! I really like how the story illustrates how unusual things can be one person's treasure. I also enjoyed seeing the cubs interact with one another in a realistic game of "My treasure is better!". Very fun to read.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-04-01
This is such a fun, beautiful, funny story! :) I especially like how Glow "shows up" Rill and Cinder by finding the most interesting thing!! :) And too funny how she wants to make matching necklaces for her parents... I do love how Chicory and Rainpace are both encouraging! :)
Hannah Bochart
New! Entered: 2011-03-15
I can't believe it took me this long to read this one! It's so cute, I can't even handle it. I don't think the inevitable "era of brown" poop-fascination that almost all kids go through has ever been addressed in EQ land. Way to take on the challenge!!
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2011-02-18
*grin* I, too, must admit I love seeing the Rainpace/Chicory/Glow family cuteness here! I absolutely ADORE Glow's selflessness towards dear Daddy. ;)

That said, I loved watching Farscout and Goldspice watching the cubs be kids. So cute, there, too! :D
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-11-21
I know that you did this just for an excuse to include the coprolite necklace! :) But I loved the interaction amongst all the children at the beginning, and how much it helped to delineate their very distinctive personalities. The little family interaction at the end is icing on the cake -- we haven't had enough of Rainpace and Chicory as a family yet, so this very fond and affectional parental interaction is great to see.
Kyna Hansen
New! Entered: 2010-08-23
Ha I had to look up what coprolite was, and man, did you nail the description! Very cute little story, I like the way you depicted the children and their special brand of thinking.
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2010-08-21
Told you already that I love this little story. The interaction between Rainpace, Chicory and Glow is so sweet and warm and funny. Great!!!
More!! ;)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-08-20
I have to second. I love how you played out all the interaction. All the cubs are beaming with personality - like Coppers withdrawn and more silent (still childlike) behavior, Rill's eagerness and cinders thoughtfulness next to Glow's ability to be so regardless exited. Love to see them like this and this reminds me so much on the excursion my nice made just last Spring :D.
I also like all the details.

And yeah. I love to see more of Chicory and Rainpace together. They make such a cute couple. I love the sent part between them so much XD

What can I say Whitney. I love it.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-08-20
*lol* How cute! Don't we all had a time when poop was one of the most fascinating things ever :p? I loved seeing all the cubs in their differences! Also, yay, a look at Rainpace and Chicory as a couple and with their little girl!
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