Comments on 'Home Again'
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New! Entered: 2016-04-23
|I like how they take care of each other! The pulling the furs up to Evervale's chin and then snuggling in on either side hints of habit.. As well as knowing when it's time to stop sending/talking!|
New! Entered: 2011-07-11
|What a sweet story! I like the closeness of the three lovemates, it feels very comfortable. |
But what I like most, is, how frustrating the word-hunt can be for the elves, because they have at first no idea which word can mean what. Very realistic and I look forward to the progress of the word-hunters!
New! Entered: 2011-06-26
|What a sweet glimpse of Evervale, Longshot and Pathmark's relationship! They all seem so at peace with each other and their place in the world, at least for now.|
New! Entered: 2010-11-21
|I liked this addition to the word-hunters storyline, because it's a nice reminder of the connections the word-hunters have back home -- tribemates who are themselves very interested in what the word-hunters are doing. Plus, given the way the members of this threesome are all engaged in different tasks these days, it's nice to get to see them get some time together.|
New! Entered: 2010-09-20
|I really like the dynamic between the three of them here. And there was a real feeling of Evervale finally being able to relax at home.|
New! Entered: 2010-08-19
|:) It is fun to see the three of them together, and to see how they react to separation and reunion.|
New! Entered: 2010-08-17
|Aaaaw they are so sweet together! More, more!!! :)|
I have to agree: the three of them seem very familiar with each other. Even as a reader I feel welcomed... if that makes any sense. Well done!
New! Entered: 2010-08-11
|I agree with Mel -- it's nice to see these three together, and it's also nice to see a little more about how word-hunting trips go. The interactions between all of them were really sweet. Hope we can see more in the future!|
New! Entered: 2010-08-10
|That's a sweet come home story :) |
The three mating need more attention. They seem so all over the place loving and familiar already. It's also nice to get a reminder on Evervale's hopeful optimism toward the humans.