Comments on 'Scent of Success'

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Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-27
Heehee! Sexy and funny at the same time! ;) Absolutely loved following Foxtail's scent-hunt. I felt like I was there, myself! And of course Notch would be constructing another "torment"... ;)
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2012-01-19
Wow, this was steamy without actually involving a certain act - very nice! But most of all, I really loved your description of the smells. It's so great that the Wolfriders have such sharp senses, and you are so good in spinning the words to visualise that! Loved it :)!
Lea R.
New! Entered: 2011-08-30
I love your writing. It's very imaginable and you can write very sexy! I love how you portray the lovemating/relationship between Foxtail and Notch. And how you describe Foxtails "scent-hunt" it's amazing, i could never describe this so very exact!
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2011-08-05
Ooh, I really like this one. These two have such amazing chemistry in your fics ^_^ You have a real talent for writing sexy stories without detailing the actual act.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-11-21
It seems really fitting that the obviously deep and passionate relationship that Foxtail and Notch have is one that involves ALL of their senses. This story is really great for the way it activates and examines a sense that is so rich and adds so deeply to their sensuality.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2010-10-15
You say so much, so quickly, and yet it's not lacking for anything. Steamy, fun, and utterly enjoyable!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-08-15
What an passionated pair those two are. They really hit it off didn't they?
Very intense brewing feel. Could feel the tickling in my neck. Love your writing Angie just love it. ^^
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2010-08-11
You do have a knack for writing steamy stories! I like seeing more of the friendship/relationship these two have, and hope we get to see more!
Hannah Bochart
New! Entered: 2010-08-06
You are so good and writing the sexiest passages, Angie! I love the scent hunt, especially how you write it so well I can almost smell Notch myself!

Thanks for another fun romp!
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