Comments on 'Everyone's a Critic'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2014-04-15
Seeing the elf-blood in our elves' bonds is always a delight! I loved the vivid, easy flowing descriptions of Moss' music making and Weasel's thoughts.
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-01-06
My favorite thing about this story is just how much of a diva Weasel is himself! Bravo!!
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2011-08-05
What an interesting wolf! There aren't many wolves who would choose to help their elf-friend write a song rather than just running off if they didn't like the music. Obviously these two really compliment each other in terms of personality. Such a neat subject for a story!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2010-11-04
:) I *love* this story! I think it's so much fun to see Weasel directing Moss in music-making. And I have to believe the wolf when he sent *not good* and made suggestions of what to add... :) This was just great. I really hope you *do* write more stories about our 2 throwbacks!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-07-24
It's fun to see a wolf with such strong opinions -- that Weasel doesn't just react by going far away to avoid his elf's music-making, but instead wants to offer criticism. Good for him! :)
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2010-07-21
Haha! Thanks for another interesting look into the mind of one of our throwback wolves ;) Nicely comedic viewpoint that made me giggle.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-07-20
Hehe, this was so cute and funny! I love seeing Moss and Weasel interact, they're such a great pair! I especially loved how it showed Weasel's throwback qualities - he's a very intelligent one! Also, it's always great to see Moss in the creative process :).
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-07-16
Hehe nice one. I like this interaction between Weasel and Moss. Also liked to see Moss in the creative process. It's nice to see that and again I immanently had the pictures clear on my mind. I am really found of your style :)
Hannah Bochart
New! Entered: 2010-07-15
Hip-hip hooray, three cheers, bravisimo, and whatnot!! I cannot thank you enough for putting Weasel center stage in this one. You caught him perfectly, especially the theatrical side :)

I was also really taken in by your portrayal of Moss gathering nature into a song. You really caught my boy at his best/worst here.

It brought up some really silly but cute memories of myself at age six set up in front of a crappy fisherprice microphone with a synthesizer recording what I thought was beautiful recreations of falling leaves and butterflies flying. Listening back to my random key plunking and little warbling voice now makes me think that Weasel would have booed me off the stage too ;)

So well done! You have won my heart, tee-hee!
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