Comments on 'The Rhythms Between Them'

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Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-12-31
Your description of them "playing music" together was quite sensual. One could almost feel the sparks crackling between them, so intense was the mood you caught here. Very good job!
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-30
It's interesting to see that Goldspice has inherited her mother's focus. I doubt Ice would have tolerated Moss' improviced "stomp" performance, which just makes the differences and likenesses between mother and daughter the more visible. Wonderful look at the couple and how they interact!
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2012-01-14
Wow this was awesome. Its great that eventhough she is so focused in her work she can still have an enjoyable time with Moss, where he isn't just sitting there watching. This is a good look into what kind of relationship the two of them have.
Lea R.
New! Entered: 2011-08-09
I love this story! The idea of creating rhythms in a forge is sooo great! And you managed it wonderfully to write down this specific rhythm they are playing together. A very special view on the love between Goldspice and Moss.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-04-01
I think what inspired this was the idea that "Stomp" would probably make some amazing rhythms in a forge... :)
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-07-05
What a great couple these two make! I love how they are both creative in their own ways -- and how they find a way to combine those very different types of creativity. Wonderful metaphor for their partnership. :)
Trena Driessen
New! Entered: 2010-06-19
I really love this story and am so glad you did it! So much passion! I love this look into Goldspice and Moss!
Hannah Bochart
New! Entered: 2010-06-05
Sooo very sexy. This may be my favorite love scene yet, and there wasn't even any kanoodling. Though they didn't touch, the connection between them was veritably palpable. It really makes me feel like I was right there. Oh joy, so very well done!
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-06-04
Aww, that's so cool :D! I love percussion, and that fits the two of them so well! And yay for more Moss and Goldspice! I'm so glad we get to see more of them now :).
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2010-06-04
I agree with Mel -- it's nice to see these two together! And also nice to see that they're so close that they work together well in more than the obvious ways :)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-06-04
yeah! Elf metal Music XD I really could imagine the sound of that music. I always loved such kind of rhythm. :)
And it's SO good to see more screen time for those two lovers. :D I feel as if they hadn't had a lot of that. Just freaking cute. They make such an interesting couple and this story shows so well that here two creative minds meet. :)
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