Comments on 'Finding One's Balance'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a negative comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, genuine personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Submitted ByComment
Ingrid G.
New! Updated: 2016-04-22
It's nice for Evervale, really still a cub, be viewed as a full fledged adult, and Pathmark being so proud of her! And the contrast between him and Farscout is well portrayed. I almost feel that Farscout represents Pathmark in the future!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-07-05
Nice little character-study here, and it's great to see Pathmark get the spotlight more or less on his own.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2010-06-09
This was such a fun read. Pathmark is so sweet! And I love how we see a slip from the general optimism, but how he gets it back so quickly. And wow... you did really well with Farscout...
Heidi Henderson
New! Updated: 2010-06-03
I like seeing Pathmark in action here! And I agree with what the others said - you nailed his characterization here :)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-06-03
Sweet, sweet Pathmark. I like this very much. He's such a sweet one, isn't he? His worry for Evervale is very touching. And I agree I like how you showed Farscout's personality in a few lines. Very strong and powerful.

The last line I like very much. It somehow shows he's ready to focus now .. and trust in Evervale and that they are both needed in the tribe... Nope.. I can't explain it :P
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-06-03
Yay, more Pathmark! And aww, this was adorable :). I think you managed to nail him, and I especially liked how you contrasted him against Farscout - and how Farscout's character comes through so clearly only through the few lines he has.
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2010-06-02
I'm so happy to see Pathmark featured in a story! We really don't see enough of him, and you definitely got his personality down pat :)
Hannah Bochart
New! Entered: 2010-06-02
Thank you so much for giving Pathmark a voice. I love his character so much , but we really could see more of his side of things. He's such a sweet, good guy. I love the pride he takes in his lovemate, and the eagerness and apprehensions he feels at learning at Farscout's elbow.
Login to add or edit your comments.

Back to Top | Home Page

Home | Characters | Art | Fiction | Resources | Links | Messageboard | Contact | Member Login

[Visual Design: Ellen Million | Sidebar Art: Rachel Vardys | Coding and maintenance: Ron Swartzendruber]
[No portion of this site's content may be used or copied without prior, written consent.]
[Send comments or questions about the site to | Report Web errors to | Page Last Modified 29SEP2012 01:17:35 | Exec 0.02 secs]

'ElfQuest' is a registered trademark. © Copyright Warp Graphics, Inc. All rights reserved worldwide. We're just playing in this sandbox!