Comments on 'New Tricks, Old Treats'

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Beth K.
New! Entered: 2014-08-04
I just love the sense of playful defiance that permeates this couple. They're fantastic plotting together; and the reunion really made me happy to see that they weren't broken by it; but the emotion you put into this really made it clear how tough it was on them. Beautiful and twisted, and I wonder how much like Foxsly and Crest they'd be if Foxtail does eventually become Chieftess here.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2011-06-26
Ah, these two... I don't know what I think of them, not quite, but they're so much fun to read about! Everything in this story, from dialogue to actions, told me something about both Notch and Foxtail, as well as their future plans. Very interesting read, can't wait to see what they'll get up to next!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-07-05
Love seeing these two plotting together, and can't wait to see where it goes! I'm not sure whether to be alarmed or not... because Notch's agenda is slightly unclear, and of the two of them, he's the one whose motives seem the more selfish, to me.What amuses me the most, though, is that it sounds like the two of them think they are so cleverly subverting the punishment that was given to them... or at least, it seems to me like they both indignantly resist the idea of "learning" what the punishment was meant to teach, instead being focused on how they can "play a game" to make others think they learned... but you know, you get to the point where you wonder what the difference between the two things actually is. ;-) Part of the point of the punishment was to make them think, and hopefully make them learn... and perhaps they didn't. But if they wind up doing what the chief wants them to (i.e. be "better citizens"), then I wonder if it matters exactly why they're doing it? ;-)
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2010-05-29
This pair is HOT, as usual.
What I really like is how subtly Notch is working Foxtail to fit his whims... and making her think that she's getting what she wants. It's all very interesting...

Though I have to say, I *almost* pity Notch when Foxtail realizes what he's been doing to her all this time.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-05-28
It's strange but at some point the two of them reminded me on a 20th gangster couple :P
Very intense. Somehow it fits very will with the group of pranksters falling apart that the left behinds would grew closer. They make an interesting couple. I can't wait to see what comes out of that plotting.
Adrienne Willis
New! Entered: 2010-05-28
I'm glad to the see the two of them becoming closer, but at the same time I'm very worried about what their plotting will mean to the tribe.
Reyes L.
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
Wow. I'm both curious and frightened to learn what these two are plotting. XD
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
Really nice to see these two together, and I love seeing how they plot together! Can't wait to see what effects their scheming has...
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
It's fun to see more of the Notch/Foxtail relationship pursued here. I love Notch's twisty mind, and how it's not entirely clear how much of his manipulations Foxtail is aware of. They make such a fun pair!
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
Wow, steamy! Those two honestly make a hot couple - and they know it XD.

I really like that Foxtail's ruined hair got picked up here again and how Notch understands and, frankly, uses what it means to her. He's a real bastard! Good thing, though, as that looks as if it will be interesting ;).
Linda Aarts
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
Ahh, it is wonderful to see these two in.... well, action, in the broadest sense of the word, obviously. Great minds think alike, eh? I was shocked upon finding out that Foxtail had cut her hair and I can't wait to see new pictures of her. Notch was on his best, and I am curious about his new plan -- and IF they are going to succeed to pull it off. It must be quite something ;) Nice to see a story featuring the both of them!
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