Comments on 'Priorities'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-06-28
Pretending she had convinced herself, Kestrel pushed herself off the ground defiantly and rose to her feet.

Of all the good lines in this story - and there were plenty of those - this is my favorite. And it's always a pleasure to see these three-mates interact, showing how well they know each other, after having known each other for such a long time.
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2011-09-22
This is soo interesting! I especially love the problems Snowfall and Kestrel are looking at considering Willow and True Edge. :) I was taken by surprise that Kestrel's lovemates had actually been thinking along similar lines. I also really like the brief mention of Kestrel's gliding powers, just so matter-of-factly thrown in.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-07-05
I'm only surprised that it took this long for someone in the tribe to realize that this would be a possibility! :) Especially since the tribe's own legends say that the healers in the distance past could and did do this... but except for once, Owl never did, so I also like that it isn't really a foregone conclusion. And the ripples from Willow's actions, taking it upon herself to heal Brightwood and the baby against BW's family's wishes (which includes True Edge), adds such an interesting wrinkle to things -- since you have to assume that a big part of succeeding in such a thing would be the whole-hearted participation of all involved. I'm interested to see how this proceeds, not least in how they get True Edge on board!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Updated: 2011-03-08
For some reason, their plotting bothers me a little... though healer-helped pregnancy would work. I don't know that i can see a Healer-induced Recognition... but... anything's possible.

Updated: Given more time to think about it.... this is an exciting starting point to an interesting storyline! I look forward to seeing wehre it goes.
:)

I do think it is going to be a long road for Snowfall and Kestrel to convince True Edge - because I can imagine it will take quite some time before he'll trust Willow enough to let her be that intimate.
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
I'm looking forward to see how this is going to develop in the future, because there are certainly going to be some twists and turns along the way! I can't help but wonder how events current to this story will shape attitudes and opinions involving this relationship and the threesome's friends.
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
I've never seen a healer-assisted Recognition storyline pursued before, so it'll be interesting to see where this goes in the future!
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
Yay, I'm sooo happy to see this up finally! That storyline promises to be so much fun - can't wait! Poor True Edge, we will see if his head is hard enough to go against two plotting lovemates XD.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
Oh that's nice. I knew about their plans and I really like to see it coming up now. Hehe I agree. Gotta love True-Edge's stubbornness through I think it will make it hard for Kestrel and Snowfall to get through to him with their plan.
I like it how they are both wise enough to keep it private even if I couldn't help but think "Female-plotting"!

So much going on in this tribe. I can't wait to see more of this.
Linda Aarts
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
I loved reading about the threesome! I love seeing Kestrel, Snowfall, and True Edge together -- they make such an amazing pairing. And I'm happy to see that there's finally talk of a healer-recognition! The stubbornness of True Edge made me laugh, and the two females SO know their lovemate for keeping their plans private, for now :) I can't wait to see what happens!
Hannah Bochart
New! Entered: 2010-05-26
Huh, I never thought of Kestrel in such a fragile, feminine way before. She seems such the authoritative elder-scout. It's really nice to see her softer, more vulnerable side. And its even nicer to see the workings of this dynamic three-mating, especially with True Edge's stubborn, manly sewing project! Tee-hee! Loved it!
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