Comments on 'With You'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-10-17
This story felt so... REAL! All the reactions and emotions rang very true. Willow's feeling that she did nothing wrong as palpable as well as the dread of the sending, shunning and shaming ("then you can begin the work of regaining everyone's trust").
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2011-07-27
These bigger, more involved stories, are so nice because our tribe is so small and close-knit -> everyone impacts each other. :) I especially like One-Leg's role in all this!
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2011-06-30
Ah, Willow's side of the story was equally interesting as Windburn's in the previous installment. Seeing her slowly start to undestand, as well as her tribemates reaching out to her (especially One-Leg) really moved the story forward.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-06-27
I'm so glad to see that Willow is beginning to understand, though she still believes that she didn't do wrong, that she did wrong by pushing away her friends and her lovemate. It was great that they all showed her support, so she had at least that before facing the sending about Owl. I was so glad especially to see Beetle and Willow make up! And One-Leg just warmed my heart ...
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-07-05
Definitely glad to see the developments here -- it's good to see how this situation is spreading out and being seen by the rest of the tribe, too, since it's truly something that touches everyone.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
Oh my I can't wait to see how this is going on. I'm so glad to see Willow and Beetle made up again. It was so heart-wrenching to see them in a fight and it FELT so real.

What I really like to see in this story is how different the tribe handles Willow's "failure" which wasn't a failurein her eyes. That's truly something that will be a topic in the tribe and I am somehow glad Willow is not all on her own.

And One-Leg just warmed my heart in the end. It's going to be interesting.
Linda Aarts
New! Entered: 2010-05-26
So, finally Willow is finding out that she's not alone in all of this, eh? I'm happy she understands not everyone is against her, though she still seems to have trouble accepting that the way she handled things was wrong. I really like these stories being sequels!
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