Comments on 'Not Chosen'
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New! Entered: 2016-08-17
|I don't think I've ever seen Suddendusk agitated! Well that's before he had a late bloomer cub!! Interesting that Sweetvine didn't realize the wasp nest wasn't a hive though. And now we know how Wasp got his name!|
New! Entered: 2011-08-18
|The wolfbonding truly is a mistery, right? I like the conclusion in this story here, that both sides have to chose each other that a bond can form itself, it's an interesting idea.|
New! Entered: 2011-06-22
|Ah, a little bit of the mystery that is wolf-bonding reveiled! Greatly enjoyed reading this - the mood was quiet and even though Sweetwine's near encounter with the wasps was dramatic, it fit with the over all tone.|
New! Entered: 2011-06-18
|Holly, thanks for giving me a starting point for this and letting nematode it!! It was a lot of fun, though I was initially hard-pressed to figure out where I wants dto go with it. |
The other thing I enjoyed was brushing up against something that seems easy to take for granted- that wasps and bees are a real hazard.
New! Entered: 2010-07-31
|What, I was convinced I had commented on this story already 0.o?|
I really enjoyed having a look at a wolf bonding that is not entirely commonplace without it being a really dramatic thing - there's some drama but it's not about the bond they form :). Instead that was rather quiet and, for lack of a better word, private. I really like the idea that both elf and wolf made a choice to form the bond!
And it's probably totally inappropriate but as I wrote in my comment to the picture it sparked, "I choose you, Wasp!" made me imagine Blacksnake as a Pokémon trainer and that made me laugh XD!
New! Entered: 2010-07-05
|Thank you for writing this, Lyn! You took my completely nebulous ideas and turned them into a real story, making Blacksnake's bonding with Wasp far more interesting than I had thought to come up with on my own. :) I really liked how this brought up the element of the wolves having a real choice in the matter, too. Blacksnake and Wasp definitely seem suited to each other, but I liked that they had to come around to that conclusion, rather than it being obvious to them at the start.|
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
|I liked this! It's neat to know that important moments like those featured in this story aren't necessarily cut and dried like we might assume they would be!|
New! Entered: 2010-05-20
|I agree. What I like the most about it is the questiion "How dose it work". And I like how Blacksnake is dwelling over the idea which of the wolves would suit for him. A great story about bounding :) |
This showed me how much Blacksnake and Wasp really suit. I can't tell why but it dose!
New! Entered: 2010-05-20
|I loved the insight of wolf bonding, and the discussions it might spark. I always wondered how it worked exactly, thinking that it was usually the wolf that chose and the elf accepted. Clearly, from this story, it's a little bit of both :)|