Comments on 'Picking Your Prey'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-22
Sensual and an nice exploration of Foxtail growing up. Notch being an infernal tease was a given XD
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2011-06-23
Wow, this was steamy! I'm all hot and bothered now *grin*. It's really great to see how Foxtail and Notch complement each other and the sense of playful challenge between them. I really loved the flow of the story and the atmosphere in this.
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2011-02-09
Nicely written! Interesting peak into the beginnings of the Notch & Foxtail relationship, I love the sense of playful challenge that exists between them here. Hot! :)
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2010-05-27
*fans self*

It's interesting to read this story, knowing the personalities of the characters depicted here. One wonders what motivations they had for this little interlude -- and it's neat to know how the friendship/attraction is still there after all these years.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-05-20
That was very sweet and steamy... Oh boy I see more of that stories coming with 4 Teenagers after the jump.
I love how you write Angi. So full of atmosphere. Very nice tale.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2010-05-20
Hot and steamy... blushed while reading it! :) I love how Foxtail and Notch seem to be playing each other! Good for her, though, for knowing what she wanted and being confident to try and get him!
Trena Driessen
New! Entered: 2010-05-20
nice, very steamy. I wonder how it is that Foxtail gets all the erotic tales haha! Guess it goes with her personality well .. perhaps she is another Starskimmer in the making!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-05-17
Whew, steamy! :D Really great job handling this very pivotal moment, and I love seeing how very connected Foxtail and Notch were from such an early age. It's just so clear how strongly they complement each other... and I still get the sense from this of wondering whether that's such a good thing, or not. ;-)
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