Comments on 'Why?'
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New! Entered: 2016-05-18
|Snowdrop/Snowfall was always so good with cubs!! Young True Edge... Now I know where Quick Fang and Rill get their personalities from! i.e. Not always easy!!|
New! Entered: 2014-12-14
|Ah, a cub's curiosity! I love it! This was a really cute story, seeing Snowdrop cub sit the adventurous little one. I really enjoyed her explanations and then her eventual attempt to curb his curiosity.|
New! Updated: 2011-09-14
|"Because I say so."|
Ah, how many times haven't adults tried to end discussions with children with just those words? It's interesting to see the younger days of some of the older elves - reminds you they weren't always 500+ years and lifemates.
New! Entered: 2011-09-13
|LOL! I had a feeling where this was going when I saw the title, but I must say you did a SUPERB job with it! I think just about every adult who's ever dealt with children has had to play the "why" game. I really, really love how Lightgaze was putting thought into his questions and being really sincere, rather than just repeating "why?" to press the adult's buttons. :) Poor Snowdrop! At least she has that patience, otherwise I'm sure she'd be screaming. Very cute, and I love the ending!|
New! Entered: 2011-07-25
|This is too cute ;) Funny, too, considering what the two of them will go through in the future. Little True Edge just doesn't give up, but luckily Snowdrop seems to have infinite patience XD|
New! Entered: 2010-05-17
|Oh yeah... True Edge was THAT kind of kid! Of course he was. I really like in this how you can see the adult that Lightgaze will become... and how Snowdrop's endless patience is also foreshadowing for the patience she will continue to have with True Edge as an adult. ;-)|
New! Entered: 2010-04-23
|Good work on this... I can almost hear little TrueEdge asking "Why?" "Why?" "Why?" and can definitely sense Snowfall's exasperation. But... it's also great to see how she is so at ease with cubs, and how instinctively she seems to know what to do.|
New! Entered: 2010-04-20
|Adorable Mareike. Simply adorable. I love this early look on Snowfall and TrueEdge. I know you struggled for a while but I really like how it worked out in the end ^^|