Comments on 'Try, Try Again'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-08-29
I like how this shows ALL the dimensions of Starskimmer: rock shaper, brewer, lover, mother!
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2015-02-09
This was a neat read. I love the different things you went over that Starskimmer didn't get 'right' the first time around and how you showed that she can be quite persistent when she wants to be.
Lea R.
New! Entered: 2014-12-29
That was a very interesting read! I often tend to see Starskimmer as a one-dimensional Elf, but this fic really opened my eyes to how many talents she really has. Loved the flow of it and the endings to the paragraphs!
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2014-07-18
Oh interesting! What a great look back! Starskimmer's determination in a lot of different aspects is shown to great effect here. It's great to see all her hard work pay off in so many different ways. :)
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2014-04-23
Great look inside Starskimmer's head across the year! I feel I know her a little better now, understand her actions and reactions more.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-03-24
I really liked how this underscored Starskimmer's sunny optimism, as well as her determination, and how it influences all facets of her life. I think it really makes her stand out, and we should probably try to include her and her optimistic viewpoint more often in other stories.
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2010-03-08
I really liked this look into Starskimmer and the glimpse we get of her craft! That's one thing I'd love to see more of with some of our characters, and you did a really good job here!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2010-02-28
This story gives a lot of insight into Starskimmer. It's neat to see where she gets some of her drive and motivation, and how she was determined, even as a child, to accomplish what it was she wants to accomplish. I also like the image of her two lovers being exhausted, but Starskimmer is energized by the lovemaking... no wonder she is the way she is!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-02-28
I really grow to like Starskimmer very much. She is such a positive character and has so many talents. I like this look on her and her very strong attribute of never giving up to fast.

That was really inspiring and very nice look on her character. I especially liked the last part.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-02-26
Hehe, that was cool. Starskimmer's got the right attitude, that's for sure! Just keep trying ^^.

I really liked seeing her exploring all of her talents and working on them!
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