Comments on 'Snow Shapes'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-07-20
I like how something as simple as snow angels can get Fadestar involved with her new life, new health, and new Holt! Beetle's discomfort of cubs showed through without being obvious to the girl too! Nice job!
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-06-27
Such a nice moment. It felt like Fadestar took a step further towards being a true member of this, to her, new tribe. And Rooter's antics at the end made me chuckle.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-03-24
I really liked getting to "jump ahead" here and see Fadestar when she's in a more adventurous mood. (I know -- she's still tentative, but for HER, it seems adventurous!) And I like the way she's making connections.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2010-02-25
I *still* do try to make snow angels w/o messing them up! Wish Kestrel were around to help me up... then again, I'd be too heavy! It was really nice to see Beetle interacting with Fadestar, and successfully, too! Lol... I love how Rooter messes it up at the end and they get to start all over!
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2010-02-17
This was a really nice story, Linda :) How many of the rest of us have had that same problems with messing up our snow angels when we've tried to get back up off the ground? The solution here was perfect :)

And so nice to see Fadestar coming out of her shell, too!
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2010-02-06
This is a fun story -- and it's such a delight to see how Fadestar interacts with other members of the tribe. More, please!
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-01-31
Don't we all remember making snow angels as children :)? I really liked seeing Fadestar being enthusiastic and coming up with the solution Beetle couldn't find and how Beetle was not jealous but just happy that they found one!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2010-01-31
Hehe I remember doing that as a child. Nice interaction. It's good to see Fadestar getting enthusiastic. ^_^
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