Comments on 'Tender'

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Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-25
That was so sweet! I love the double-meaning of the title, too -- both the meat and how the lifemates are to eachother. :) It was so cute how they both had the same idea! Great to see them have a chance to spend some quality time alone together and, as Windsong said, get snowed in together! ^_^
Angie Cousins
New! Entered: 2010-06-30
It's a perfect little snapshot that just proves how incredibly well the two of them are suited for each other!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2010-03-15
Awww...they're so sweet together! This really does show the tenderness between them. I am glad that they have continued to be close to one another.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2010-01-11
Great minds thinking alike, I see. :) And proving why they're well-matched as lifemates. I agree with others that with all of the complications introduced to their lives, it's really nice to see these lifemates get a moment to themselves to reaffirm that bond.
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2010-01-08
It's really nice to see how Windsong & Suddendusk at keeping it together, despite the "disruptions" in their married life! :)
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2010-01-05
Aww, I love the description of the hunt! It's very vivid and palpable, a great atmosphere! Windsong really is a formidable huntress :).

And I like to see Suddendusk and Windsong together and how they both had the same idea XD.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2009-12-30
I like the atmosphere in the first part a lot:) The whole scene and the surrounding is described so well I can see it in front of my inner-eye. Very well done. I wished I had the patient to describe things so throughly.

I like the idea behind it as well ^^ and to see the lifemates together and caring for each other ^^ Nice little story :)
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