Comments on 'To Teach a Lesson'

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Ingrid G.
New! Updated: 2015-09-27
For once Notch wasn't behind this! LOL! The way Honey carries on and on (and on!) it almost looks like a personality disorder or even a mental illness. Not crazy about the revenge. Did it teach her a lesson? Maybe on how to pout more. Victim Mentality Tier 3, Level 15!! LOL
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2013-05-11
Interesting story about the turbulent interactions at this time! Very intense, on all fronts. The ending was an interesting twist.
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2011-08-25
Interesting how one single elf can "divide" a very close community. Really enjoyed reading about the different point of views here. Was surprised at Dreamflights´ critique on her mother, but liked that as well.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2011-06-27
I really liked Thornbow's role in this - him defending Honey, even though she's been so horribly rude to everyone since she woke up, was touching (even though I personally want to sit Honey down and have a talk about acting like an adult). Pathmark sticking up for his sister was a nice contrast and I can't wait to see where this goes in later stories!
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2011-02-18
I'm glad to see that the way it turned out, Honey wasn't standing alone entirely, even if she wasn't entirely right. (After all, Willow *was* involved... but Honey was too quick to point the finger that way.) Good old Thornbow, it's true what Pathmark said about brothers!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Updated: 2014-12-03
Melanie - I'd LOVE to see a drawing of Beetle in everyone's clothes like that! :)

New comment/2014: Sadly, I don't think Honey learned anything from this lesson. :/
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2009-12-09
Yeah, I really liked in this one how the pranksters did all this planning, but events didn't wind up going EXACTLY to plan; that feels realistic. I also liked how it seemed like people weren't fooled in the end -- it would have driven me nuts if this had backfired and created more sympathy for Honey, or something! I'm really interested to see where things go from here.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2009-11-30
Great job! I like how this turned out. I suck at thinking of good pranks but that seemed to be well thought-through. I am longing to draw Beetle in all that cloth XD

It'S interesting how that turned out in the end and I have to say the end felt very real. I like it that the prank worked and at the same time not and how some elves started to realize what is going on and through it seems not sloved yet. Great job!
Amy Chandler
New! Entered: 2009-11-08
You guys did a great job with this. The descriptions (and cautious handling) of the stench in that bladder made my nose wrinkle and I'm only imagining the smell. Poor Willow. Poor Honey. I hope they work it out soon.
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