Comments on '"It wasn't easy. For any of us"'

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Beth K.
New! Entered: 2016-06-11
I really love your use of shadow here - the darkness behind Honey really emphasizes the title you chose. The colour are so rich - I really love the way you shaded the skin and clothing. Honey's expression really gets her emotions across, and it looks so genuine and hurt. One little critique might be that the blue in the tears really stands out - I'd suggest that the blue there could be more subtle or just a use of white/skin shadow colour from behind the tear-tracks might be a bit more realistic, but the blues definitely make the tears stand out here. Especially against that beautiful green you have for her eyes! Lovely emotional portrait!
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