Comments on 'Family'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2015-12-27
Loved getting a deeper look into the True Edge-Kestrel-Snowfall relationship! They have so, so much history to them and I really felt that in this story. What happened here also clearly explained why it's taken them such a long time to get together as a trio, with a clear build-up behind it.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-07-10
Awww. The start. I bet there are many guys who would envy True Edge right now. This was darling. I can only echo the voices saying that it's good to see True Edge being so reflective and self aware. I am so looking forward to all this development with this threemating.
Karena Kliefoth
New! Entered: 2009-05-29
Great story! It's wonderful to see the Holt relationships growing and evolving.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2009-05-15
:) I like the way that TE is developing as a character! It's neat to see him a little vulnerable and to see how he handles that! I look forward to seeing what becomes of these three!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2009-05-10
It's great to see this develop! I liked how once TE was made aware that *he* was an obstacle to his lifemate's plan and happiness, he just matter-of-factly decided to go deal with it. Very forthright! But I liked how he was determined to do whatever it took, too, even if that meant finding words for something not easy to explain and that he was uncomfortable admitting to.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2009-05-06
Yaaay! I'm so glad it's finally up! I so love it - it's so touching how much consideration True Edge has for Snowfall and for Kestrel as well. I think that will become a great threemating! Can't wait for more stories and pictures about our little family :)!
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2009-05-06
This was a nice, touching look at a new chapter in the lives of these three tribemates. It was an interesting twist how it was TE who cemented the whole situation ;)
Linda Aarts
New! Entered: 2009-05-05
Oh, glee! It's finally up :D You know, what really made me laugh was that True Edge is still his blunt self, even in emotional situations -- straight to the point, he is :). Also, Snowfall must be really happy, otherwise she'd never grin that wide XD I'm really looking forward to see pictures of the three of those, and stories about how their threemating evolves (before and after Fadestar wakes up). This family's going to be pretty interesting :D
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2009-05-05
Yaaay! I couldn't wait for this story to be put up! I love it just as much now as I did when I first read it. The scene between True Edge and Kestrel still chokes me up a little. The whole story is absolutely perfect :D
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