Comments on 'Search for Perfection'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-04-13
I like that Thornbow is calm and happy in this story. Sometimes he appears as cranky or a little tormented in others. Glad he has his bows!!
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2014-02-14
These two are two of our elves I so far haven't seen interact much. It was nice, the sort of quiet understanding between them, which I guess is only logical since they've known each other for so long. Sometimes I forget who old elves can get and that they've only got each other for company. Not exactly a stream of new faces coming in from the 'elf village next door'.
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-27
Very lovely short story. I really liked Pathmark's carrying pouch full of sand for smoothing. Also, this was quite a nice look at Thornbow's craftsmanship, the careful way he's going about his carving. And of course, never satisfied with the last finished project! :D
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2011-06-30
Lovely Such a quite atmosphere. I also love the glimpse on Thornbow. He's such a fascinating character. Nice look at them. Very telling. Thornbow seems to be a very patient person.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2010-02-14
This piece was beautiful in its brevity! I enjoyed seeing the interaction of characters I don't normally put together in my mind. :) (Miss you, Beth!)
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2009-07-28
It's really nice to see the interaction between these two characters, and it's a nice bit of insight into each of them, as well! (You know we miss you, Beth!)
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2009-03-31
I like the quiet sense of camaraderie here, and also how it's an astute explanation of Thornbow's outlook.
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