Comments on 'Territorial Rights (Windburn & Farscout RTH 2511)'
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New! Entered: 2013-03-07
|This is a really neat "snapshot" piece, and I love how it draws us in and makes us want to know everything about what's behind it. Even though you give us a hint of what's going on, I want to see the full story. :) My favorite bit of this is Farscout's expression, focused on something in the distance, thoughtful and analyzing, and disconnected from the strong reaction of his chief.|
New! Entered: 2013-03-01
|As I know I've told you before -- this really looks like it's an illustration to a story! Or a panel out of your next comic! ;)|
New! Entered: 2013-02-10
|Poor them! Obviously each one is none too pleased about how close the FO's came to their home! O_O Seeing the chief react like this really does bring that concept home, doesn't it? And Farscout's expression really does strike me as one of "See? Right over there, by the..." I also really love how the only real red in the picture is Windburn's hair, which I think really draws the focus to him and his expression.|
New! Entered: 2013-02-09
|Great scene! There is definitely a story there ...|
I really like your way to do layouts, you often find such creative angles, and this is no exception. The expressions are great, really hinting at the story behind this! Love the colouring, too (the shine on the torc really catches the eye!).
I wouldn't have seen the action as restraining on Windburn's part either, for me it looks more like reaching out to confirm he's still there, something like that. In any case, great illustration!
New! Entered: 2013-02-03
|great definition on the muscles - fantastic expression on their faces and really nice use of color - I really like this picture.|
New! Entered: 2013-02-03
|Oh great "teaser" I see a lot of priomis in this one and personally I am such a fan of art that tells a story that's not there yet ;) |
Farscout here has a very interesting expression and Windburn looks as if he is angry about something but not at all at Farscout. It's more the anger you want the other to make unreasonable.
Nice layout as well. Such half body things can be tricky, but I think it works here and creates some dynamic. It didn't look much like restraining to me but reaching out to make sure he's still there. Maybe confront him about something.